Question

【題目】調(diào)查表明，有許多青少年有不吃早餐的習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

原因	晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，早上起得遲；用吃早餐的錢(qián)去上網(wǎng)玩游戲；一些女孩為保持苗條身材常不吃早餐。
結(jié)果	不利于身體健康；上課時(shí)想睡覺(jué)；影響記憶力和學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)。
建議	早餐不可少，它能提供全天所需能量的30%。青少年健康應(yīng)從早餐開(kāi)始。

注意：1.不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫。

2.詞數(shù)100左右；

3.參考詞匯：苗條的：slim能量：energy。

A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast.________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast.

There are different reasons for this.Some students study late into the night and get up late,so there is not enough time to have breakfast.Some students do not have breakfast to save money to play games on the Internet. Besides, some girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast.If teenagers often don't have breakfast,it is bad for their health.They will feel sleepy in class.It will have bad effects on their memories and studies.

In fact,breakfast plays an important part.It can provide us with 30% of the energy that the body needs the whole day.To keep fit,teenagers should start their day with a regular breakfast.

【解析】這是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文，包括學(xué)生不吃早餐的原因，結(jié)果以及提出相應(yīng)的建議。應(yīng)根據(jù)表格所列提綱，靈活運(yùn)用不同的句式，適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，是文章表達(dá)流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)層次突出。此篇文章應(yīng)主要包括三部分內(nèi)容：

學(xué)生不吃早餐的原因：晚上學(xué)習(xí)太晚，早上起得遲；用吃早餐的錢(qián)去上網(wǎng)玩游戲；一些女孩為保持苗條身材常不吃早餐

學(xué)生不吃早餐的后果：不利于身體健康；上課時(shí)想睡覺(jué)；影響記憶力和學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)

提出相應(yīng)建議：早餐不可少，它能提供全天所需能量的30%。青少年健康應(yīng)從早餐開(kāi)始

寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意本文是基于調(diào)差報(bào)告來(lái)寫(xiě)的，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意語(yǔ)態(tài)。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

結(jié)構(gòu)層次分明，第一段用一句話(huà)總結(jié)調(diào)差報(bào)告結(jié)果，第二段緊接著闡明原因，說(shuō)出后果，最后一段說(shuō)明早餐的重要性并對(duì)學(xué)生提出建議。

連接詞使用自然，使文章表達(dá)清晰連貫。闡明原因時(shí)用“some students……some students……besides……”三個(gè)緊密連接的句子表達(dá)，使文意表達(dá)清晰自然流暢。