Question

假設(shè)你是高一學(xué)生李華，你的美籍同學(xué)Tom患了流感在家休養(yǎng)，請(qǐng)給他寫封信，內(nèi)容如下：
1. 表達(dá)關(guān)心和問候;
2. 提出建議：  
1）早睡早起，養(yǎng)成規(guī)律的生活習(xí)慣;
2) 健康飲食，多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果;
3) 加強(qiáng)鍛煉，多參加戶外活動(dòng)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to know that you’ve got flu.__________________________________________
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I hope you will be back with us soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you’ve got flu. Are you feeling any better now? I’m really worried about you.
In order to help you get well soon, I strongly advise you to get up early in the morning and never stay up too late. I believe a healthy lifestyle will make a big difference. Besides, you should be on a healthy diet. Don’t eat too much fat or sugar. You can try some fresh fruit or vegetables, which will be of great benefit to you. What’s more, if possible, take regular exercise or take part in outdoor activities with friends, which will surely keep you fit.
I hope you will be back with us soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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