Question

20．假設你是李華，在紐約學習期間，到當?shù)匾患疑痰曩徺I了一臺隨身聽，但回到住處后發(fā)現(xiàn)了"播放"鍵失靈．請你按以下內(nèi)容要點用英文給商店經(jīng)理寫一封信．
1．離店時的情況；
2．使用時的問題；
3．該物品的用處；
4．對商店的要求．
參考詞匯：隨身聽：walkman
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Dear Manager，
I'm one of your customers．       
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The problem is that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all． 問題是那個播放鍵根本不起作用
高分句型二：
You see，a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English and I cann't wait too long before this problem is solved．你知道的，一個隨身聽對于我的英語學習是有很大幫助的，我希望這個問題很快就能得到解決
句型一 that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all 該句是一個由that引導的表語從句，that在從句中只作引導詞，不充當句子成分
句型二 ①a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English  該句謂語部分使用了一個重要句型：be of+great+n=be+very+adj 
            ②before this problem is solved 該句是一個由before 引導的時間狀語從句

解答 Dear Manager，
   I'm one of your customers．The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop．Before I left，I did check it carefully and everything was all right．When I got home，however，I found a fault with it．The problem is that the"Play"key now doesn't work at all．（高分句型一）（情況說明）It may not be so big but I can't see why．Probably it's not your fault and nor is it mine．Anyhow，I can't solve be problem in person．
   You see，a walkwan is of great use for me to learn English and I cann't wait too long before this problem is solved．（高分句型二）Hopefully you'll deal with the walkwan without delay，when you receive my letter．（提出希望）
   Hoping to hear from you in the earliest possible time!
Yours sincerely，
 Li hua

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應的寫作要點．考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．