Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

My aunt was a smoker for long time.I couldn't stand smell the cigarettes in her breath I loved her very much,but I hate being around her.That I did was telling my parents about my feelings.They understood me,but told me that they would say anything to her about it.My parent told her I loved her so much that I was worried about her health. My aunt gradually kicked her addiction of smoking by chewing gum,and eventual quit altogether!It made everyone much more happier when we were together.

Answer 1

【答案】1.for后加a

2.smell→smelling

3.hate→hated

4.That→What

5.but→and

6.anything→something

7.parent→parents

8.of→to

9.eventual→eventually

10.去掉more

【解析】1.for a long time很久，很長時間，固定搭配，做句子的時間狀語。故加上a.

2.stand doing忍受做某事，是固定搭配。故把smell改為smelling.

3.根據(jù)句子時態(tài)可知該句也應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，hate形式不對，應(yīng)該用過去式hated。故把hate改為hated.

4.That I did在句中是主語從句，句中缺少did的賓語，應(yīng)該用what 做從句中的賓語，引導(dǎo)這一從句。故把That改為What.

5.根據(jù)句意可判斷此處表示“他們很理解我，并且告訴我他們會跟姑姑說的”，因此前后分句是并列關(guān)系。故把but改為and.

6. anything表示任何事，本句表示“他們會跟姑姑談這件事”，應(yīng)該用something about it。故把anything改為something.

7.根據(jù)上句提到my parents，因此此句同樣表示“父母親”，應(yīng)該用parents.故把parent改為parents.

8.表示“對…的癮”應(yīng)該用addiction to sth.，故把of改為to.

9.此處應(yīng)該用副詞修飾動詞quit，eventual的副詞形式為eventually.故把eventual改為eventually.

10.happy的比較級為happier，more多余。故把more去掉。