Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

I am a 19-year-old girl named Gina. When I was 17, I gave blood for the first time. It was a little scary because I don’t like needles and I am afraid of looking at my own blood.

The blood drive was in the high school gym. I determined to help because I had read the poster about how much one pint(品脫：計量單位) of blood could do for someone else.

After signing a form, I lay in the chair. When I waited for the nurse to get to me, one girl I didn’t know well noticed my nervousness and sat next to me, telling me what a good thing we were doing for someone else. It took a long time to get a pint. But somehow, I suddenly felt like an adult when my first blood donation was finished. I had overcome my fear in order to do something selfless that would benefit others.

Now ,I still donate blood. The Red Cross calls and invites me to blood drives, and I always try to go. It’s not scary any more. It’s something you do for others, without getting anything in return.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

國外的很多青少年都把獻血視為步入成年的標志。請你在看完所寫的短文后，就“獻血的意義”這個主題寫一篇短文，說說你對獻血的看法，內(nèi)容要點包括：

1.以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

2.現(xiàn)在社會上人們對獻血有哪些不同的看法；

3.你自己對于獻血持什么樣的態(tài)度， 為什么；

4.你認為獻血對于青少年思想成長的意義。

【寫作要求】

1. 字數(shù)120-150

2.可以利用實例或其他論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用閱讀材料中的句子。

Answer 1

【答案】

In the passage, Gina, a 19-year-old girl, shared us her first experience of donating blood, in which she realized that what she did would benefit others and made her an adult.

People’s opinions on donating blood vary from person to person. Some people believe it’s good to both patients and donators. However , others are willing to give blood because they think it may be harmful to their health.

As to me, I am in favor of the first idea. Those people who need blood must be seriously ill or badly injured, so you can save life if you donate blood in time. Besides, donating blood will not do harm to our health. According to doctors, we even can benefit from it physically.

When growing up, teenagers should begin to do something for the society and other people. Donating blood is a good way to help us understand our social responsibility and the meaning of giving.

【解析】

試題分析：該類寫作考查考生閱讀理解、要點概括、用英語敘事說理等多方面能力。解答此類試題，除了要注意一般寫作規(guī)范之外，還要準確理解所給文章的中心思想并準確予以解讀和概括。需要首先概括所給材料內(nèi)容，然后介紹不同看法和自己的看法。應(yīng)該用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。要盡量使用高級詞匯和句型。

【亮點說明】本文首先介紹了Gina的情況，然后提出人們的不同看法，用as to me作為紐帶，聯(lián)系到自己的看法，最后提出倡議。文中使用了一些連接詞，如 besides，however等。還用過了狀語從句if you donate blood in time.定語從句who need blood等等，較好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。