Question

19．某英文報"健康生活"欄目正在討論有關(guān)健康食品、體育鍛煉與少年兒童肥胖的問題．右側(cè)六幅圖是李明一年中的變化，請根據(jù)李明的情況寫一篇短文．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于60．   2．短文的開頭已給出．
提示詞語：junk food 好吃但不利于健康的食品     snacks 各種零食

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于看圖作文．由圖可以看出李明本是一健康孩子，但他從一年前開始大吃垃圾食品及各種零食，躺在沙發(fā)上看電視，缺少體育鍛練，以至于上樓時氣喘噓噓，后來他注意調(diào)節(jié)飲食，加強體育鍛練，又變成了一個健康孩子．要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局．要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)．如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；本文屬于記敘文，而且敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，故使用一般過去時．
【亮點說明】本句中的連接詞使用較為合理，如besides，as a result等；同時本句中的高級句式也較多：he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did little exercise．和What a terrible thing!這個感嘆句；以及定語從句 Those who are facing the same problem，why not have a try？高級詞匯如：break away，obesity等等．
Li Ming used to be a healthy boy，but over a year ago，he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．（高分句型一）
As a result，he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs．（高分句型二）
He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．（高分句型三）

解答 A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity（肥胖） among children．Take Li Ming for example．Li Ming used to be a healthy boy，but over a year ago，he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．（高分句型一）Besides，he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did little exercise．As a result，he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs．（高分句型二）So Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have balanced，healthy diet．He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and playing basketball．（高分句型三）Months later，Li Ming became as fit as before．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．