Question

【題目】某報社就“關(guān)愛空巢老人”這一話題進(jìn)行征文。請你根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英文短文投稿。內(nèi)容主要包括：

空巢老人越來越多的原因；2. 他們面臨的問題；3. 如何幫助他們。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly. __________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly. Social and economic developments have led many young people to choose to work and live far from their hometowns, leaving their parents alone.

The empty-nest elderly can’t manage things that require much manual labor. And because of long-term loneliness, they may have mental problems like depression.

Therefore, we should pay more attention to them. We should call for volunteers to offer them help on a regular basis. We can help them clean the house, buy household items, carry heavy things upstairs, etc. Besides, the government should spend more money providing places for the elderly to be entertained and communicate.

【解析】

試題分析：注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)上：可采取總分模式。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次【亮點說明】文章第一段和第二段介紹空巢老人的由來以及現(xiàn)狀。第一段第一句：Old people that live alone with no family member to take care of them are now called the empty-nest elderly. 那些獨居的沒有家庭成員照顧的老人現(xiàn)在被稱為空巢老人。該句包含了一個That引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾old people，后面的are前面的所有部分是句子的主語 with no family member to take care of them這是with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。第二句用了一個分詞做伴隨狀語 leaving their parents alone把他們的父母單獨留在家。文章第二段第一句使用了一個定語從句The empty-nest elderly can’t manage things that require much manual labor. 空巢老人不能做需要太多人力勞動的事情。That在定語從句中充當(dāng)主語。第三段說明我們應(yīng)當(dāng)采取的措施。本文用了不少好的短語和連詞。第三段中的Therefore, 因此。Call for 要求、On a regular basis定期的、Besides此外，用于引出下一個觀點、spend some money doing something花錢做某事。文章中的高級句型和短語都為文章增色不少，同學(xué)們在作文中可多多使用。