Question

【題目】用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹查爾斯·達(dá)爾文(Charles Darwin)的100詞左右的短文。

人物：查爾斯·達(dá)爾文

生平：1809年2月( February)2日出生(be born)在離塞文河(the River Severn)不遠(yuǎn)的一個(gè)家庭里，十六歲時(shí)，達(dá)爾文進(jìn)入愛(ài)丁堡大學(xué)(Edinburgh University)學(xué)醫(yī)(study medicine)。后來(lái)，他又被送到劍橋大學(xué)(Cambridge University)學(xué)習(xí)，并于1831年畢業(yè)(graduated in 1831.)。達(dá)爾文持續(xù)不斷地從事他的科學(xué)研究( continue his scientific studies) ，直到1882年去世。他被安葬 (be buried) 在倫敦威斯敏斯特教堂(Westminster Abbey)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Charles Darwin was born on February 2，1809，in a family，which lived not far from the River Severn.

Charles' father was a wellknown doctor and he hoped that his son would become a doctor.As a boy，Charles liked to go for walks in the fields and woods，comparing what he saw with everything he had read in the books.He was also fond of collecting many things，such as birds，eggs，stones，leaves and so on.At sixteen，Darwin was sent to Edinburgh University to study medicine.But he was interested in natural history.Then he was sent to study at Cambridge University，from which he graduated in 1831.

Darwin continued his scientific studies until he died in 1882.He was buried in Westminster Abbey.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇人物傳記，要求用100詞左右的短文介紹查爾斯達(dá)爾文。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。切記不要逐句翻譯。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

這是一篇人物傳記，內(nèi)容符合要求，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。Charles Darwin was born on February 2，1809，in a family，which lived not far from the River Severn.非限制性定語(yǔ)從句用在句中；Charles' father was a wellknown doctor and he hoped that his son would become a doctor并列句中包含著賓語(yǔ)從句；Charles liked to go for walks in the fields and woods，comparing what he saw with everything he had read in the books現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；Darwin continued his scientific studies until he died in 1882.until引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。