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【題目】為了幫助中學生健康成長,我校英文報開設(shè)了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假如你是該欄目的編輯李華,收到一封署名為Jamie的求助信。信中Jamie向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣,使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給他寫一封回信。
內(nèi)容要點如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息； 3.信的開頭與結(jié)尾已擬好,不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：temper n. 脾氣,情緒
Dear Jamie,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】普通范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Everyone may have such bad times, so don't worry too much about it. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad. Here are three useful tips:

First of all, talk to others about your problems. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second, go out and play games with your friends. It can help you relax. Third, always believe that good things will happen in the future. In this way, you may stay happy and be full of energy most of the time.

I hope you will feel better soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

高級范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, don't feel too bad. You should learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad. I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

First, don't keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger. Third, remain optimistic about your future. ⑥Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份給Jamie的求助信寫一封回信，寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由。寫作時還要注意文章的時態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人。寫作時注意多使用高級詞匯和多種句式，選用合適的連接詞或者過渡詞，提高文章的可讀性，讓文章連貫流暢。