Question

【題目】假如你是校學(xué)生會成員，校學(xué)生會將為來訪的美國朋友舉辦一個晚會，要在全校通知此事，請你依據(jù)如下要點(diǎn)寫一則通知：

目的：歡迎來訪的美國朋友；

組織者：學(xué)生會；

時(shí)間：10月18日（星期六）晚上7：30，活動大概持續(xù)一個半小時(shí)；

地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校體育館

活動內(nèi)容：音樂、舞蹈、唱歌、游戲、交換小禮品；

參加人員：所有學(xué)生，特別是英語俱樂部的成員。

要求：請包裝好禮品、簽名并在包裝外面寫上祝愿詞；準(zhǔn)時(shí)參加。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)120字左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。

2．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，要組織成一篇通順連貫的短文。

參考詞匯：交換禮品 exchange of gifts 包裝 wrap up

Notice

We are glad to ________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

The Students’ Union

Answer 1

【答案】

We are glad to inform you that the Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, October 18, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the school gym. It will begin at 7:30 p.m. and last about one and a half hours. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. All the students are welcome to attend the party, especially those who are members of English club.

You are required to bring along a small gift for this purpose. What’s more, remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.

Please be on time. We are sure there is a lot of fun.

Thank you for your attention.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，寫一則通知，將學(xué)生會將為來訪的美國朋友舉辦晚會的消息通告全校。寫作要點(diǎn)有：舉辦晚會的目的；晚會組織者；晚會的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；活動內(nèi)容；參加人員；要求等，所寫作文必須涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，不能有遺漏；詞數(shù)在120詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；注意使用參考詞匯。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了一般將來時(shí)和賓語從句inform you that the Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening與We are sure there is a lot of fun.；定語從句who are members of English club等，使作文句式多樣，錯落有致；

范文使用了一些固定搭配和詞組：are required to do；for this purpose；what’s more；wrap it up；on time等，充實(shí)了作文內(nèi)容；

范文還注意使用and, especially, what’s more等銜接句子和段落，使作文結(jié)構(gòu)顯得更加緊湊。