Question

假如你是李紅，新轉(zhuǎn)入一所學(xué)校。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表中的提示語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則日記，敘述這幾個(gè)星期以來(lái)新老師和同學(xué)對(duì)你各方面的關(guān)心、幫助以及你的感受和愿望。

生活方面	同學(xué)們從家中帶來(lái)當(dāng)?shù)乜煽诘氖澄锝o我吃。 同學(xué)們帶我參觀校園，周末邀請(qǐng)我到他們家做客。 下午放學(xué)后，同學(xué)們經(jīng)常帶我去操場(chǎng)跑步、打排球。
思想方面	老師、同學(xué)們找我談心，和我交朋友。
學(xué)習(xí)方面	老師、同學(xué)在學(xué)業(yè)上幫助我
感受和愿望

注意：1.詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（日記開(kāi)頭已給出的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
3. 條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。
6th June
My teacher and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. _________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

不唯一
They brought me local foods from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invited me to their homes to watch TV and enjoy dinners. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies.

解析試題分析：這里日記的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，因?yàn)槿沼浭怯涗浺呀?jīng)發(fā)生的事。所以通常都用一般過(guò)去式，但是，考生應(yīng)該注意的是，如果你的日記是描寫(xiě)風(fēng)景等等的，是不用過(guò)去式的，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，也可以用一般將來(lái)式。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要全面，上下段要使用連接詞做到連貫。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。