Question

13．同齡壓力（peer pressure）是青少年成長過程中經(jīng)常遇到的問題．假如你是李華，你的朋友Jack發(fā)來電子郵件求助如何應(yīng)這個(gè)問題．請(qǐng)你給他回一封電子郵件，幫助他認(rèn)識(shí)到同齡壓力是不可避免的，以及緩解壓力的辦法．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于120個(gè)；
2．不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear Jack，
In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure．
                                                                        
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We often find someone who is superior to us．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，we can learn from those who have real talents．
句型一 who is superior to us 該句是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who在從句中作主語，替代前面的先行詞someone
句型二 those who have real talents．該句是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who在從句中作主語，替代前面的先行詞those
此外，該文章中還有以下重要短語和詞匯：
deal with 處理   share with 與某人分享   compare with  與某人進(jìn)行比較  spare no effort to do sth 努力做某事
重要句型和重點(diǎn)短語的結(jié)合使用，使得文章表達(dá)更有層次，表達(dá)更為準(zhǔn)確

解答 Dear Jack，
    In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure． I'm very glad to share my views with you．（寫信目的）
    Peer pressure is a common problem for us young students．We often find someone who is superior to us．（高分句型一）For example，they come from a better family，or they have more talents．Firstly，I think we must face it and be aware that peer pressure is unavoidable．Secondly，we must know that every one of us is unique and has our own advantages．We needn't compare ourselves with others and feel discouraged and depressed．Thirdly，we can learn from those who have real talents．（高分句型二）It's useless just to envy them．（問題分析）By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly．Finally，we should take a careful look at our present level and set a practical goal，and then spare no effort to achieve our goals．（緩解方式）Because of our focus on our own goals，we have no time and energy to think about peer pressure．
    I hope my advice can be of help to you．
                                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．