Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，打算高考完（7月份） 去倫敦旅游一周，現(xiàn)在你就此事發(fā)email給倫敦的朋友Bob。主要內(nèi)容包括：

1．詢問當(dāng)?shù)氐奶鞖馇闆r及你需要帶的東西；

2．詢問當(dāng)?shù)氐木包c(diǎn)及收費(fèi)情況；

3．請(qǐng)Bob幫你在旅館預(yù)定一個(gè)房間（對(duì)房間價(jià)格、設(shè)施的要求由考生自定）；

4．詢問Bob關(guān)于當(dāng)?shù)氐姆ㄒ?guī)以防出錯(cuò)。

注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；

2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入句子總數(shù)。

3．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

Dear Bob，

How are you getting on recently?

I will have a seven days trip to London this summer, and I’m writing to you for some information of London as well as your advice and help._________________________________

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I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob,

How are you getting on recently?

I will have a seven days trip to London this summer, and I’m writing to you for some information of London as well as your advice and help.

I’d like to know the weather in July so as to take some proper clothes with me. And what necessities should I take for my trip? Also I’d like to ask you to name some places of interest for me including the entrance fees in order that I can arrange my trip and have a budget in advance. If you have time then I’ll trouble you to book a single room in a hotel near your home. Its price should be ordinary, but there should be at least a computer in the room. I am sure I can communicate with the local people but I am afraid of making mistakes if I am not familiar with the law and rules there which may be foreign to my country’s , so I have to trouble you ahead of time.

I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，要求根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容寫一則書信。根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應(yīng)按照書信的格式寫，內(nèi)容包括：詢問當(dāng)?shù)氐奶鞖馇闆r及你需要帶的東西，詢問當(dāng)?shù)氐木包c(diǎn)及收費(fèi)，請(qǐng)Bob幫你在旅館預(yù)定一個(gè)房間，詢問Bob關(guān)于當(dāng)?shù)氐姆ㄒ?guī)以防出錯(cuò)等幾個(gè)方面。本文是一則書信，所以用第一人稱，以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫作時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點(diǎn)，使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并達(dá)到要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。此外為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級(jí)詞匯，并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)】文章用了書信應(yīng)該用的格式，恰到好處的運(yùn)用了將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，時(shí)間點(diǎn)都用的非常好。雖然沒有用過多華麗的詞語，但是寫的很樸實(shí)，沒有過多的雕飾。運(yùn)用了定語從句等多種從句，還用了很多復(fù)合句，條理清晰，很符合題意，詞數(shù)也正好在要求的區(qū)間內(nèi)。