假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

This autumn, my class went to the seaside to go camp.We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view of the sea and mountains. We set up our tents on the sandy beach, when night fell we started a fire to give us light and kept us warm.All my classmates sat around them, talking, singing and laughing. Several hours later ，Robert and I went back to the tent to have the chat. We stayed up all night. We found that we two had a lot of in common. For example, we all like the same singers and have a great enthusiasm for physics. The fire and stars see our happiness. What I wished time would stop at the moment!

1.camp改為camping

2.well改為 good

3.在when前面加and

4.kept改為keep

5.them改為it

6.劃掉singing

7.the 改為 a

8.all改為 both

9. see改為 saw

10.what改為how

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯題

1. running, go shopping等。

2. good；well是一個副詞，不能修飾其后的名詞view,應(yīng)該用形容詞來修飾名詞，故用good.

3. night fell we started a fire to give us light and kept us warm. 這個句子前面已經(jīng)有一個句子We set up our tents on the sandy beach,并且這兩個句子間是用逗號隔開的，英語當(dāng)中兩個單獨(dú)的句子必須要有連接詞and。

4. give給了我們很好的提示。

5. around后的代詞應(yīng)用其賓格，故應(yīng)把them改為it。

6. , 此處的singing意義重復(fù)，應(yīng)劃去。

7. 改為 a；have a chat表示泛指的一次談話，這里并沒有指特定的談話，故應(yīng)把定冠詞the改為不定冠詞 a .

8. both；we表示兩者，其后的同位語代詞也應(yīng)該是表示兩者，而 all表示所有的， 故應(yīng)把a(bǔ)ll 改為both.

9. see改為 saw；文章通篇用的都是動詞的過去時態(tài)，所以此處的see應(yīng)該改為saw.

10.

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