Question

假設(shè)你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華。下面四幅圖描述了上周一你騎自行車上學路上發(fā)生的一件事情。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，將這件事用英文以日記形式記述下來。
注意：1. 日記的開頭已為你寫好。
2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。
提示詞：剮蹭 scratch

Monday，October 28                                         Fine
This morning,

Answer 1

Monday，October 28                                Fine
This morning, I went to school by bicycle as usual. As I was listening to my favourite music with a headphone on my head, I didn’t notice a car parked on the roadside. I scratched the car and left a scar on it. Thinking that I would have classes, I left a note with my name and address to let the driver know what happened.
Later in the afternoon, while we were having a class meeting, our headmaster brought a stranger to our class. He was the car owner. He explained to the class the whole story and praised me. Both my teacher and classmates were impressed and proud of my honesty. I think honesty should be valued most.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，騎自行車上學路上發(fā)生的一件事情。要求用日記的形式記錄下來，寫作時要看清圖畫表達的內(nèi)容，也要適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】. As I was listening to my favourite music with a headphone on my head, I didn’t notice a car parked on the roadside.這句話用了時間狀語從句， Thinking that I would have classes, I left a note with my name and address to let the driver know what happened.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語和賓語從句， while we were having a class meeting, our headmaster brought a stranger to our class. 這句話也是用了狀語從句。