Question

14．假設(shè)你目前在英國(guó)參加語(yǔ)言培訓(xùn)班，住在Mrs．William家．你需要完成培訓(xùn)老師布置的作業(yè)：用英語(yǔ)描述你的房東．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．外貌特征；
2．容易相處；
3．對(duì)中國(guó)感興趣．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：l20詞左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫．
I'm now staying at Mrs．William's．         ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇記敘文，要求描述自己的房東或房東太太．內(nèi)容包括：外貌特征；和藹友善的性格，相處融洽的關(guān)系；經(jīng)常照顧你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；對(duì)中國(guó)的歷史文化很感興趣；再根據(jù)自己的觀點(diǎn)，來(lái)發(fā)表一下自己對(duì)房東或房東太太的看法．描述人物用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)；第三人稱．常用到描述人物的詞語(yǔ)有：be friendly to；get on well with； be interested in等．
She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）
She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）
What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）

解答 One possible version：
      I am now staying at Mrs．William's．She is said to be in her forties but looks much younger．She is of normal height by the western standard，with a slender figure，blond hair and big blue eyes．（高分句式一）She usually wears a smile on her face and that makes her even more attractive．（高分句式二）（簡(jiǎn)單描述）
I really like this outgoing woman．We get along well with each other．She always takes care of my daily life．She cooks and washes clothes for me．That makes me feel like at home．What's more，she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．（高分句式三）So she often reads books about China．She hope to visit China one day．I think If she comes to China，she must love our beautuful country．And she can visit some places of interest and meet some friendly Chinese．（對(duì)中國(guó)感興趣）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．