Question

11．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，給�？�"英語角"寫一篇英文稿件，介紹你和同學(xué)上周去大涼山希望小學(xué)開展支教活動(dòng)的全過程．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于60．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：my classmates and i heated to Daliangshan Hope School carrying some books donated by our class．帶著同學(xué)們捐贈(zèng)的書籍，我們前往大涼山希望小學(xué)．carrying some books 現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語表示伴隨狀況；donated by our class 過去分詞短語做后置定于修飾books．
句型二：The students participated in the class actively，which in turn inspired us．用which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制定語從句．
句型三：Chattingand laughing，we felt it was the most enjoyable time．用Chattingand laughing兩個(gè)現(xiàn)在分詞短語放在句子開頭做狀語．

解答 Last Monday，as volunteer teachers，my classmates and i heated to Daliangshan Hope School carrying some books donated by our class．高分句型（一）Upon arrival，we were warmly welcomed by the whole school．In the following days，we gave them lessons and patiently helped them with their studies．The students participated in the class actively，which in turn inspired us．高分句型（二）After class we played basketball together．We also showed them our school life on our IPad．Chattingand laughing，we felt it was the most enjoyable time．高分句型（三）Seven days flew by，it was time for us to say goodbye．Many students came to see us off．We hugged each other and expressed our wish to see each other soon．（這段敘述事情）
    In this activity，i experienced the happiness of helping others．（最后一段發(fā)表心情）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本次作文為圖畫類，主要考查學(xué)生觀察能力、分析能力、想象能力、創(chuàng)造和語言表達(dá)能力．同學(xué)們要想寫好，需注意幾點(diǎn)：1．仔細(xì)審題，確定文體人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；2．找全要點(diǎn)，兼顧圖畫內(nèi)外；3．準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，盡量避免錯(cuò)誤；4．仔細(xì)檢查修改．