Question

下面短文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分

    Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist in women’s diseases. She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration she showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside, explaining how to cut the death rate from having or caring for babies.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 lived→living

 that→when

 which→that

 success→successful 或 succeed或∧a

 is→was

 tiring→tired

 去掉for

 safe→safely

 woman→women

 or→and

【解析】

試題分析：林巧稚是研究婦女疾病的專家。她生活在一個女孩子的教育不受重視的時代。是她的努力和決心使她考入了醫(yī)學院。而后來讓她成功的是她對病人所表現(xiàn)出來的體貼周到和她的善良。她把自己的一生都奉獻給了病人，她成功接生的嬰兒多達50000多名。

 考查非謂語動詞。Lin Qiaozhi, lived from 1901 to 1983, was a specialist s根據(jù)句子結構可知此處live是做狀語，和句子主語Lin Qiaozhi構成主動關系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞。把lived改為Living

 考查定語從句。She lived in a generation that girls’ education was second to boys’Generation后的定語從句意思完整，不缺少成分，所以判斷用關系副詞，而generation表示時間，所以把that改為when。

 考查強調句型。It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school.根據(jù)句意可知此處是強調句型，強調句型構成“it was/is…..that ”，所以把which改為that。 

 考查短語。What made her success later on. 在“Make +賓語+賓補”結構中，補語應該是動詞原形、形容詞或者名詞，而此處success指“成功的人或成功的事”，所以可以把success改為successful 或 succeed或前面加a。

 考查時態(tài)。There is story after story。整篇文章講述過去的事情，要用過去時，所以把is 改為was。

 考查形容詞。tiring after a day’s work。tiring“令人疲倦的”，tired“感到勞累的，厭倦的” 而 此處指的是盡管林巧稚身體疲勞，但仍去幫助別人，所以把tiring改為tired。

 考查介詞。who could not pay for her。Pay for sth “付款 ”，而此處指支付某人費用，所以用pay sb，把for 去掉。

 考查副詞用法。and safe delivered about 50,000 babies.修飾動詞deliver應該用副詞，所以把safe改為safely。

 考查名詞。She also wrote a book intended for woman。此處泛指鄉(xiāng)村的婦女們，要用復數(shù)名詞,所以把woman改為women。

 考查連詞。from having or caring for babies。根據(jù)文章內容可知此處是并列關系而不是選擇關系，所以把or改為and。

考點：考查短文改錯。