Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你所在的學校將要舉辦一場春節(jié)慶�；顒�。你和你的同學邀請你校的美國交換生Tom參加。請你一封信給Tom，要點如下：

1.邀請Tom一起表演，一個中西合璧的節(jié)目；

2.活動時間：農(nóng)歷12月30日晚7：00---10：00；

3.活動地點：學校學術(shù)報告廳。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. __________

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We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

You have told me that you are very interested in how we Chinese celebrate our traditional festivals. With the Spring Festival approaching, I would like to invite you to join us in the celebration in our school. A variety of activities will be included at the celebration, such as performances, games, and gift-exchanging, which will surely enable you to know better about our culture. To get fully involved, I , together with my classmates, hope that you can put on a performance with us. And I think it will be a good combination of both our culture and yours. By the way, the celebration will take place in the school lecture hall from 7:00 pm to 10:00 pm on December 30, according to the Chinese lunar calendar.

We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，你所在的學校將要舉辦一場春節(jié)慶�；顒印Ｄ愫湍愕耐瑢W邀請你校的美國交換生Tom參加。請你一封信給Tom，要點如下：1.邀請Tom一起表演，一個中西合璧的節(jié)目；2.活動時間：農(nóng)歷12月30日晚7：00---10：00；3.活動地點：學校學術(shù)報告廳。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子。非限制性定語從句的使用：……which will surely enable you to know better about our culture.動詞不定式表目的的使用：To get fully involved,連接詞的使用也是一大亮點：such as，together with，By the way，according to。