Question

Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below
in Chinese.
在緊張的高二備考階段，英語王老師為了提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，廣泛征求學(xué)生意見，并借此訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。假如你叫張華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給老師寫封信，表達(dá)你的需求和建議。
● 為夯實(shí)基礎(chǔ)，適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考和消化的時(shí)間；
● 請(qǐng)反復(fù)訓(xùn)練易錯(cuò)的知識(shí)點(diǎn)，提供典型試題；
●…… （個(gè)人補(bǔ)充）
●…… （個(gè)人補(bǔ)充）
●…… （個(gè)人補(bǔ)充）
注意：
1．短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)以及個(gè)人的補(bǔ)充要求或建議，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2. 參考詞匯：lay a solid foundation打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)  slow down減緩速度；放慢速度
3．詞數(shù)：120個(gè)左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr．Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision, __________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________  
Yours
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wang,
Thank you for providing us with an opportunity to share our views．
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation．So please slow down and make sure we have really mastered what we learn．Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves and to digest．As for those confusing points where we often make mistakes, would you please provide us with typical exercises to practice more? Meanwhile, we need your guidance on writing, for example, how to think in English and write in idiomatic English．I still have another request: select exercises of high quality and assign us less homework．
By the way, as the examination is drawing near, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study．We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time．
Yours
Zhang Hua

本題是寫一篇給定要求的書信，寫作的話題為給老師提出學(xué)習(xí)的建議，內(nèi)容包括建議老師適當(dāng)放慢進(jìn)度，留出思考和消化的時(shí)間；建議老師反復(fù)訓(xùn)練易錯(cuò)的知識(shí)點(diǎn)，提供典型試題；建議老師對(duì)英語寫作進(jìn)行指導(dǎo)；建議老師布置高質(zhì)量的練習(xí)，安排更少的作業(yè)；同時(shí)寫上對(duì)老師的感激以及對(duì)于即將到來的測(cè)試所表現(xiàn)出來的心情，在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意書信的格式，同時(shí)注意寫作內(nèi)容要符合題意，注重語言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性。