Question

根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇120字?jǐn)?shù)左右的英語短文介紹微博，包括以下內(nèi)容：

基本信息： 微博：一種網(wǎng)上日記 話題：從日常小事到全球重大事件 內(nèi)容：定期更新、公開、簡短、140字以內(nèi) 主要影響： 正面：便于人們表達(dá)心聲、交流想法；信息的傳播比以往更快更廣 負(fù)面：可能泄露隱私或其他重要的個人信息；誤導(dǎo)性信息使公眾無法辨清是非

微博  microblog     隱私 privacy     誤導(dǎo)性  misleading

Answer 1

Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years. Microblog, a kind of online diary, covers a wide variety of topics ranging from small daily incidents to major global events. It provides the regularly updated information which is open to the public with very brief contents, usually within 140 words. As a new way of communication, microblog definitely has some positive influence on our life because it makes it convenient for people to express their feelings or opinions and exchange them with others. Besides, it enables news and messages to spread more quickly and widely than ever before. On the other hand, it also affects our life negatively because it is possible for people to give away their privacy or other significant personal information and some misleading information prevents the public from telling the right from wrong.

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，要求寫一篇關(guān)于介紹微博的短文，要點都已經(jīng)給出，包括基本信息，主要影響，要考生表達(dá)清楚，審題時注意本文使用的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時為主，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的It provides the regularly updated information which is open to the public with very brief contents, usually within 140 words.和As a new way of communication, microblog definitely has some positive influence on our life because it makes it convenient for people to express their feelings or opinions and exchange them with others.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：象such as，besides等等。
點評：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。