Question

【題目】 短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is studied in Britain. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to Mary, the nurse in your hospital. I had to stay in your hospital because of a traffic accident what happened last weekend. Without family or friends here, I was extreme sad and lonely. To my great joys, Mary took good care of me. She talked to me in every day and encouraged me to be strong and positive. There, I feel comfortable even if I had been at home. Thanks her professional help and care, I recovered quickly. I believe that I truly deserves praise for her kindness and professional care.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is in Britain. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to Mary, nurse in your hospital. I had to stay in your hospital because of a traffic accident happened last weekend. Without family or friends here, I was sad and lonely. To my great ,Mary took good care of me. She talked to me every day and encouraged me to be strong and positive. There, I comfortable if I had been at home. Thanks her professional help and care, I recovered quickly. I believe that truly deserves praise for her kindness and professional care.

【解析】

【文章大意】本文為一封感謝信。講述的是作者是一名在英國(guó)的中國(guó)學(xué)生，住院時(shí)護(hù)士Mary的精心照料他并鼓勵(lì)他要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和積極。在她的專業(yè)護(hù)理和幫助下，作者很快康復(fù)。作者很感激Mary，給她所在的醫(yī)院寫(xiě)了一封表?yè)P(yáng)信。

第一處：第一句話中的studied改為studying�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：我是李華，一個(gè)正在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)的中國(guó)學(xué)生。study與主語(yǔ)之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，且為現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，故用studying與is構(gòu)成現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。

第二處：第二句話中的the改為a�？疾楣谠~。句意：我寫(xiě)信表達(dá)我對(duì)你們醫(yī)院的一名護(hù)士瑪麗的真誠(chéng)的感激。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。

第三處：第三句話中的what改為which或that。考查定語(yǔ)從句。句中定語(yǔ)從句缺少主語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞which或that修飾先行詞a traffic accident。

第四處：第四句話中的extreme改為extremely�？疾楦痹~。句中應(yīng)用副詞修飾形容詞sad and lonely，故用extremely。

第五處：第五句話中的joys改為joy�？疾槊�詞。to my great joy令我非常高興的是。此處joy指的是抽象名詞＂高興，快樂(lè)＂，為不可數(shù)名詞，故改為joy。

第六處：第六句話中的in去掉�？疾槎陶Z(yǔ)。every day作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)時(shí)前面不用介詞。

第七處：第七句話中的feel改為felt�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文可知此處應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故用felt。

第八處：第七句話中的even改為as�？疾闋钫Z(yǔ)從句。句意：在那里，我感覺(jué)舒服就好像在家里一樣。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)用as if表示＂好像＂。

第九處：第八句話中的Thanks后加to�？疾榻樵~短語(yǔ)。thanks to幸虧，多虧了。

第十處：最后一句話中的truly前的I改為she�？疾榇�詞。句意：我相信她應(yīng)該由于她的善意和專業(yè)護(hù)理而受到表?yè)P(yáng)。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)該用she。