Question

假如你是劉寧，本學(xué)期剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)到另一個(gè)城市，不適應(yīng)新環(huán)境，想給好朋友宋薇寫一封郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：

1．詢問(wèn)近況，表達(dá)思念；

2．不習(xí)慣飲食和天氣；

3．聽(tīng)課有困難；

4．沒(méi)有朋友，感到孤獨(dú)。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)120左右。

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Song Wei,

                                                                                 

                                                                                   

                                                                                 

                                                                                   

                                                                                   

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

                                                                                 

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                   

Yours sincerely,

Liu Ning

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Dear Song Wei,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How is everything going with you? I have been missing you since I got to this strange city.

To be honest, I am not used to the food here and the weather always makes me feel uncomfortable. For that reason, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies. The new teachers are friendly but they speak too fast and with a certain accent that I cannot quite understand. This often discourages me in class. What’s worse, I always feel lonely after school since I don’t have good friends here. I really want to go back to my previous school, studying with you and playing together.

I’m very worried. Can you give me some help and good suggestions? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Ning

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于應(yīng)用文，它是一封電子郵件。格式已經(jīng)給出，可以直接進(jìn)入正文的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)，但是不要拘泥于要點(diǎn)的表達(dá)，應(yīng)該適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞語(yǔ)等。考生應(yīng)注意層次結(jié)構(gòu)及動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確到位。這里說(shuō)的是現(xiàn)在的狀況，一般情況下，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。考生注意使用過(guò)渡詞或者過(guò)渡句來(lái)使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。