Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分30分）
隨著人們環(huán)保意識(shí)的提高，越來(lái)越多的人選擇低碳生活（low-carbon lifestyle）。假設(shè)你是校英語(yǔ)協(xié)會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)倡議書(shū)，從出行、購(gòu)物、用水、用電四個(gè)方面倡議同學(xué)們選擇低碳生活。
注意：1．詞數(shù)；l20左右；
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：
3．參考詞匯：排放emission
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Dear fellow students, let's take action right now!

Answer 1

Dear fellow students，
The earth is faced with serious pollution and energy shortage. It is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. I think everyone should take an active part.
First of all, we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide. Second, when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. And it’ s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. Last but not least, we should turn off the tap after we use the running water. If we can make a small change in our way of life, we can make a big difference to the earth!
Dear fellow students, let’s take action right now!

試題分析：本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的倡議書(shū)。話題是呼吁中學(xué)生要“低碳生活”。有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，，內(nèi)容貼近考生的實(shí)際情況，考生有話可說(shuō)，有話可寫(xiě)。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有文采。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如： Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is time for us to lead a low-carbon lifestyle in order to protect the earth. 這句話用了It is time for sb to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)正是做…的時(shí)候了，和in order to do做目的狀語(yǔ)， we should walk or ride our bikes instead of taking cars or buses to save fuel and reduce這句話用了instead of詞組when shopping, we should bring our own shopping bags instead of buying plastic bags, which cause white pollution. 這句話用的是狀語(yǔ)從句的省略式和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句And it’ s important for us to save electricity whenever possible. 這句話用的是it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子，還有文章還用了First of all, Second,  Last but not least,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更連貫。