Question

13．假定你是李華，你接受了一項寫作任務(wù)，要為英語校報寫一篇人物介紹．請你根據(jù)以下信息，向編輯介紹一位偉大的人物．
參考詞匯：出版publish幽默的humorous
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear editor．
I'd like to introduce a great man to you．Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835．He is known to the world as a great writer．Unluckily，his father died when he was 11 years old．However，he was always positive toward life．As a young man，he did different jobs，such as a worker and a reporter．He was fond of writing all the time．As a result，many novels were published in his life．He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21，1910．
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835
Mark Twain，美國人，出生在一個貧窮的家庭在1835年11月30日．
高分句型二：
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever．
Mark Twain是一個聰明幽默的大師會被世界永遠(yuǎn)記住．

解答 One possible version：
Dear editor，
I'd like to introduce a great man to you．
Mark Twain，an American man，was born in a poor family in the countryside on November 30，1835（高分句型一）．He is known to the world as a great writer．Unluckily，his father died when he was 11 years old．However，he was always positive toward life．As a young man，he did different jobs，such as a worker and a reporter．He was fond of writing all the time．As a result，many novels were published in his life．He devoted himself to writing and died of an illness on April 21，1910．
Mark Twain who is a clever and humorous master will be remembered by the world forever（高分句型二）．
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．