Question

15．你班召開了一堂以"因特網(wǎng)對我們生活的影響"為主題的班會課，同學們進行了熱烈的討論，結(jié)果大致如下：

約55%的同學認為英特網(wǎng)對我們的生活有正面的影響	約45%的同學認為英特網(wǎng)對我們的生活有負面的影響
1．輕點鼠標就可以獲得英特網(wǎng)上不斷更新的信息； 2．通過英特網(wǎng)我們可以與遙遠地方的人們?nèi)〉寐?lián)系；	1．因特網(wǎng)的一大缺點是人們很難知道網(wǎng)上信息是否真實和準確； 2．因特網(wǎng)毀壞了人們正常生活的能力和生活方式；
你的觀點：1．…           2．…（至少2點）

請你根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇短文．
注意：1．字數(shù)150詞；
2．短文的開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)．
We held a class meeting，where students had a heated discussion on the theme"The effects of the Internet on our lives"．

Answer 1

分析 圖表類作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作．本文的要點很全面，在個人觀點方面考生可以從一分為二的辯證法出發(fā)，建議我們使用因特網(wǎng)好的一方面，擯棄不好的另外一方面．要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力．
亮點部分
As a new way of sharing information online，the Internet has won support with users of all ages．（高分句型）
 Furthermore，another truly wonderful aspect of the Internet is the way people use it to build social bonds．（高分句型） 
 Also，people who are disabled and must stay in their homes can correspond and communicate with others around the globe who have similar interests．（高分句型）
Yet，some students are skeptical，they think the main drawbacks of the Internet are that it has too much information that has not been evaluated for accuracy and that it is transforming the way people spend their time．（高分句型）
More importantly，people who spend too much time on the Internet tend to withdraw from the people and the world around them．（高分句型）

解答 The effects of the Internet on people's lives
    We held a class meeting，where students had a heated discussion on the theme"The effects of the Internet on our lives"．As a new way of sharing information online，the Internet has won support with users of all ages．（高分句型）Of course，different students have different opinions．Some students think the Internet has its obvious benefits．Firstly，Internet users can communicate with experts on all sorts of topics．Furthermore，another truly wonderful aspect of the Internet is the way people use it to build social bonds．（高分句型） Also，people who are disabled and must stay in their homes can correspond and communicate with others around the globe who have similar interests．（高分句型）
    Yet，some students are skeptical，they think the main drawbacks of the Internet are that it has too much information that has not been evaluated for accuracy and that it is transforming the way people spend their time．（高分句型）More importantly，people who spend too much time on the Internet tend to withdraw from the people and the world around them．（高分句型）
    As for me，every advantage has its disadvantage，with the development of the Internet，we should keep the balance between its benefits and drawbacks．Only by doing so，can we make the Internet truly service people．

點評 認真審題和分析所給的圖表，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和圖表之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)．根據(jù)所給圖表，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．