Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

I can’t forgot one of the most coldest nights I experienced. It was six in evening and cold winds were blowing strongly outside. The water from the tap were icy cold, and made my fingers numb. We all decided to staying inside the house. My mother made hot tomatoes soup for us. It was great to have the hot soup, as it made me feel warmly. Around nine at night, it starts snowing heavily. Look outside the window, I saw snow falling on everything. My mother held me tightly in my arms and I soon fell asleep.

Answer 1

【答案】1.forgot→forget

2.去掉most

3.evening前添加the

4.were→was

5.staying→stay

6.tomatoes→tomato

7.warmly→warm

8.starts→started

9.Look→Looking

10.my→her

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章記敘了作者經(jīng)歷過的最寒冷的一個夜晚。

1.考查動詞。can為情態(tài)動詞，后跟動詞原形，故forgot改為forget。

2.考查最高級。coldest為形容詞最高級，前面不再需要添加most。故去掉most。

3.考查冠詞。根據(jù)短語in the evening表示“在晚上”。故evening前添加the。

4.考查主謂一致。本句主語為The water，water為不可數(shù)名詞，故謂語動詞應(yīng)用單數(shù)。故were改為was。

5.考查動詞。根據(jù)短語decide to do sth.表示“決定做某事”，后跟不定式。故staying改為stay。

6.考查名詞的數(shù)。短語tomato soup表示“番茄湯”，用單數(shù)名詞，故tomatoes改為tomato。

7.考查形容詞。feel為系動詞，后跟形容詞作表語，故warmly改為warm。

8.考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)。結(jié)合全文可知事情發(fā)生在過去應(yīng)用一般過去式，故starts改為started。

9.考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，look在句中作非謂語動詞，與邏輯主語I構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。故Look改為Looking。

10.考查代詞。句意：媽媽把我緊緊地抱在她懷里，我很快就睡著了。此處表示媽媽的懷里，應(yīng)用形容詞性物主代詞her。故my改為her。