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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath．What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we enjoyed several local dish．It is such great hotel what I would recommend it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing．

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分析 本文作者通過介紹自己在北京南湖賓館的親身感受，旨在向要去北京的朋友們推薦南湖賓館；另外，本文還從南湖賓館的地理位置，交通條件，房間的設施，網(wǎng)絡以及飯菜的情況等方面進行了介紹．

解答 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we
visit Beijing last month．It is in the downtown area，but it is easy
to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport．We lived in a
comfortablydouble-room with a big bath．What I liked best were the
free high-speed Internet connection in the room．I checked my email
messages every day．I also shared for my friends many photos taking
in Beijing．The food was wonderful with reasonable prices，and we
enjoyed several local dish．It is such∧great hotel what I would recommend
it to any friend of mine who is going to Beijing．
詳解：
1．visit改為visited      根據(jù)時間狀語"last month"，可知此處指的是發(fā)生在上個月的事情，應使用一般過去時；故用visited．
2．but改為and/so     考查句意理解以及連詞    本句的意思是：它在市區(qū)，（所以）從酒店乘坐公共交通工具可以很容易去任何地方；此處表示并列/因果，而不是轉折；故用and．
3．去掉anywhere 之前的to    考查副詞    由于anywhere是副詞，所以它的前面不能加介詞；故去掉anywhere 之前的to． 
4．comfortably改為comfortable    考查形容詞     此處用來修飾名詞double-room，故用形容詞comfortable．
5．were改為was   考查主謂一致    由于本句的主語是一個由What 引導的從句，所以謂語動詞應使用第三人稱單數(shù)形式；故用was．
6．for改為with     考查固定短語    share with意為：與某人分享某物；故用with．
7．taking改為taken   考查過去分詞    此處在句中作后置定語，修飾名詞 photos；由于動詞take與該名詞之間是動賓關系；故用過去分詞taken．
8．dish改為dishes    考查名詞的單復數(shù)    此處指的是：幾種當?shù)夭耍还视胐ishes．
9．great之前加a   此處用來修飾名詞hotel，表示泛指"一家好的酒店"；故在great之前加a．
10．what改為that    考查固定結構   such…that…意為：如此…以至于…；本句的意思是：這是一家如此好的酒店，以至于我將推薦給我要去北京的任何一位朋友；故用that．

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