第二節(jié) 短文寫(xiě)作（滿分25分）

    2010年以來(lái)，我國(guó)相繼發(fā)生了幾起校園暴力事件，使國(guó)人為之震驚，震驚之余，大家都陷入了沉思：我們?cè)撊绾渭訌?qiáng)校園安全呢？請(qǐng)你以How to improve school safety為題，寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文。

參考詞匯：校園campus 保安security guard

書(shū)面表達(dá)

How to improve the school safety

School safety is a matter of great importance. Greaat efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly. Besides, the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away. More importantly, school safety education should be offered by the school. Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger.

As for us students, we should keep safety in mind whatever we do. We shouldn’t trust strangers or give away our personal information to them.

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