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19．假定你是學(xué)生李華，你校組織志愿者去常青藤特殊教育學(xué)校（Evergreen Special School）開(kāi)展"關(guān)愛(ài)自閉癥兒童（children with autism）"活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信給你的美國(guó)朋友Jack，跟他分享你的經(jīng)歷和感受．要點(diǎn)如下：
1．活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)．
2．參加人員．
3．活動(dòng)形式．
4．你的感受．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右．2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Jack，
     Thank you for your last letter．
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I look forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是學(xué)生李華，你校組織志愿者去常青藤特殊教育學(xué)校（Evergreen Special School）開(kāi)展"關(guān)愛(ài)自閉癥兒童（children with autism）"活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)信給你的美國(guó)朋友Jack，跟他分享你的經(jīng)歷和感受，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：活動(dòng)時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；參加人員；活動(dòng)形式；你的感受． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：care for照顧；set to do開(kāi)始做；try one's best盡力做；from my point of view一我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看；look forward to盼望；hear from收到…的來(lái)信
 Last weekend，the volunteers in our school were organized to care for the children with autism in Evergreen Special School．（高分句型一）
Although we were tired，we felt very happy．（高分句型二）
From my point of view，it is our duty to care for the autistic children and respect them．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      Thank you for your last letter．
      Now I'd like to tell you what I did．Last weekend，the volunteers in our school were organized to care for the children with autism in Evergreen Special School．（高分句型一） We brought some candies and fruits to the children．Upon arrival，we set to work immediately．First，we cleaned the windows and swept the floor．Then we sang and danced．After that，we played with the autistic children．We tried our best to make them happy．Although we were tired，we felt very happy．（高分句型二） From my point of view，it is our duty to care for the autistic children and respect them．（高分句型三）   
       I look forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．