Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，前兩天你收到英國筆友Herry 的來信，他在信中介紹了他最喜歡的數(shù)學(xué)老師Mr Green,并詢問你最喜歡的老師。請根據(jù)以上提示，給他寫封回信介紹你最喜歡的老師。信中須包含以下要點：

最喜歡的老師所教的學(xué)科；

你喜歡她或她的理由；

他或她幫助你的一次經(jīng)歷與感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Henry,

I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your math teacher,Mr Green.Now I’d like to tell you about my favorite teacher. _______________________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________________________________

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Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Henry,

I am glad to hear that you get on very well with your math teacher,Mr Green.Now I’d like to tell you about my favorite teacher. Mr Gao is my English teacher.He is the best teacher that I have ever had.He is able to make a subject that many students find incredibly boring come to life.Going to his lessons is something we look forward to.He treats us like friends and understands us.

I used to be very poor in English and I had decided to give up.Then I met Mr Gao.He suggested ways to improve my English and work further on my writing ,grammar and communication skills.With his advice ,I realized that I could make something out of myself and I now become more confident! I respect him a lot . Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求以李華的口吻回信給英國筆友Herry，介紹自己最喜歡的老師。所以要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。要點：最喜歡的老師所教的學(xué)科；喜歡她或她的理由；他或她幫助一次經(jīng)歷與感受�？梢允褂脤嶋H例子來說明，也可以使用虛構(gòu)的情況。但是要涵蓋所有的要點。本文要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要有變化。另外要注意格式。

亮點說明：范文里高級詞匯運用較多，如get on well with等；高級句式運用也很到位，如He is the best teacher that I have ever had.He is able to make a subject that many students find incredibly boring come to life.中的定語從句。

考點：半開放性作文