Question

假如你是李明，你的英國朋友Smith 先生將在你所在的城市工作，希望你為他找一處合適的房子。你正好看到一個(gè)房屋出租廣告。請(qǐng)按照下面的要點(diǎn)給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他這座房屋的情況。

1房屋的位置：位于商業(yè)區(qū)

2 樓層：一幢12層公寓樓的8樓。

3 結(jié)構(gòu)：兩室一廳（朝南，采光好），一廚一衛(wèi)。

4 房間的配套設(shè)施：空調(diào)(air condition)，床，桌，椅，沙發(fā)，書柜及

煤氣灶具(a gas stove)

5 租金：2000人民幣∕月

6 周邊環(huán)境：購物，交通方便

注意：

1可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使內(nèi)容連貫，語意通順；

2 120詞左右，信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Smith,

I am very glad that you will come to work here.

Yours Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Smith,

I am very glad that you will come to work here. You asked me to find an apartment for you and now I’ve found one, which I think may suit you.

The apartment with two bedrooms, a sitting room, a kitchen and a toilet is on the eighth floor of an apartment block. It is well furnished with an air conditioner, a bed, a table, a chair, a set of sofa, a bookcase and a gas stove. The bedrooms and sitting room face south, so they are bright with the sunshine. As the building is located in the downtown, it is very convenient for you to go shopping and take buses or the underground. The rent is 2000 yuan per month.

Please let me know whether you like it or not.

Yours

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的電子郵件的寫作。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文電子郵件的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于應(yīng)用文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。