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2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．沒出錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．沒出錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者 （從第11處起）不計分．
The Huaihe River has been serious polluted．Day and night million of tons of waste water are being poured down to it from hundreds of factories．The waste water was harmful．At present there is no fish in it．The river water cannot drunk．People on either bank have to dig wells to get drinking water．The Huaihe River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare to swim in them．Everything must be done to stop the pollution．The government and the people near the river must try to clear the water as soon as possible．Now special attention has been paid on to the pollution by the government and many scientist．The pollution will be prevented in the near future．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹的是淮河的水污染問題，號召我們必須做點事情來治理污染．

解答 The Huaihe River has been serious polluted．Day and night million of tons of waste water are being poured down to it from hundreds of factories．The waste water was harmful．At present there is no fish in it．The river water cannot∧drunk．People on either bank have to dig wells to get drinking water．The Huaihe River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare to swim in them．Everything must be done to stop the pollution．The government and the people near the river must try to clear the water as soon as possible．Now special attention has been paid on to the pollution by the government and many scientist．The pollution will be prevented in the near future．
詳解：
1．serious改為seriously 修飾動詞用副詞，這里修飾的是polluted，應(yīng)該用副詞，形容詞serious的副詞是seriously．
2．million改為millions 考查數(shù)詞．hundred，thousand，million前有具體的數(shù)字時，后面不能加s且不與of連用，單獨(dú)使用時，后可加s，且與of連用，意為"成百上千"，"成千上萬"．
3．to改為into 考查介詞．pour sth into…意為"把…倒進(jìn)…"，是固定搭配．
4．was改為is 考查時態(tài)．根據(jù)第一段可知，文章說的是現(xiàn)在的事情，此處應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時．
5．cannot后加be 考查被動語態(tài)．water與drink是被動關(guān)系，即水是被人喝的，在cannot后加be．
6．such改為so 考查固定搭配．so/such…that句型中，such后接名詞，so后接形容詞或副詞，dirty是形容詞，把such改為so．
7．them改為it 考查指示代詞．這里it指代的是主語The Huaihe River，主語是單數(shù)．
8．Everything改為Something 考查不定代詞．根據(jù)句意：必須做點事情來治理污染．把everything改為something．
9．去掉on 考查固定短語．pay attention to sth意為"注意…"，on是多余的，要去掉．
10．scientist改為scientists 考查名詞．many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．