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7．假如你是李華，你的筆友Henry即將升入高一．請你寫一封信件給他，提出一些高中學(xué)習(xí)和生活的建議．
要點(diǎn)：1．合理分配學(xué)習(xí)、鍛煉和休息時(shí)間；
      2．與老師和同學(xué)們友好相處；
      3．積極參加學(xué)校和班級(jí)的活動(dòng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；
     2．信件要包括以上內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱式命題作文，要求給你的筆友Henry即將升入高一．請你寫一封信件給他，提出一些高中學(xué)習(xí)和生活的建議．命題中給出了三個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)，因此考生需要仔細(xì)審題，把握主題，寫作中要包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)暮侠淼陌l(fā)揮和想象．文章要注意遣詞造句，注重句式變化，調(diào)動(dòng)自己多年以來的英語積累和語言儲(chǔ)備，寫出富于變化，有利于高中生活的短文．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，人稱以第二人稱為主．由于是提供建議，寫作中注意使用連詞，或者序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
   Here are some suggestions for you，which may help you enjoy your school life better．（高分句型一）使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句
Only in this way can you make good use of every minute．（高分句型二）only+狀語使用半倒裝
Last but not least，I advise you to take an active part in societies at school，which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves．（高分句型三）句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句

解答 Here are some suggestions for you，which may help you enjoy your school life better．（高分句型一）
      As senior high school students，You will be living a very busy life．So first of all，you should arrange your time properly．You'd better make a timetable so that you know when to study，exercise and rest．Only in this way can you make good use of every minute．（高分句型二）Besides，while in school，it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates．When you have a problem that you can't work it out alone，you'd better turn to your teachers or classmates for help．Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary．Last but not least，I advise you to take an active part in societies at school，which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves．（高分句型三）
       I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life．I'm sure that a beautiful future is waiting you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．