Question

15．你校高三年級近期將舉辦"Keys to my success"的主題演講活動，請你根據(jù)自己的高三學(xué)習(xí)體驗，結(jié)合以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇英語演講稿．
要點：1．談?wù)剾Q定成功的因素 （如：態(tài)度、方法、心態(tài)…）； 2．說說自己的做法及體會．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear friends，
I feel greatly honored to give a speech here．My topic is"Keys to my success"．
                                                          
Thanks for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
"No pains，no gains"serves as my motto，which continuously pushes me ahead．
我的座右銘是"不勞者無獲"，這一直激勵著我不斷向前．
高分句型二：
Whenever I have difficulties，I will surely turn to teachers．
無論何時我遇到困難，我都會向老師咨詢．
句型一 No pains，no gains 使用了一個格言，使得文章更具說服力，which continuously pushes me ahead 這是一個由which 充當(dāng)關(guān)系代詞，且在句中作主語的非限制性定語從句．
句型二 Whenever I have difficulties 該句是一個whenever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句
句型一和二的使用，使得整篇文章在表述時更具亮點．

解答 Dear friends，
        I feel greatly honored to give a speech here．My topice is"Keys to my success"．
       We are all eager for success．But how can we achieve this？To me，attitude，method and state of mind are the key elements．
  Attitude counts．As a senior 3 student，I attach great importance to study，and work diligently to get myself well prepared，though sometimes I feel exhausted and stressed．"No pains，no gains"serves as my motto，which continuously pushes me ahead．（高分句型二）Secondly，I value scientific and effective method．I'd listen attentively and get actively involved in warious interactions in class．After class，I enjoy thinking to myself．Whenever I have difficulties，I will surely turn to teachers．（高分句型二）Finally，a good state of mind has been accompanying me all the way．
     Different people may have different ideas．Try to find what suits you best!
     Thanks for your listening!

點評 本書面表達(dá)為提綱類作文，該類型的書面表達(dá)要求要點明確，且規(guī)定了考生的表述思路，要將所列要點全部涉及，不能遺漏，觀點表達(dá)要力求語言簡潔，準(zhǔn)確．