Question

10．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
Failure is annoying，but what failure can teach us may never be taught in other ways．
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 失敗是令人厭煩的，但是失敗對(duì)我們的教育意義是無(wú)法替代的．根據(jù)提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性．
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：范文中對(duì)于英文提示換了一種表達(dá)方式，但是達(dá)到了同樣的效果．failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are．多種形式表達(dá)同一種意思，避免重復(fù)，符合題目要求，可以使文章變化多樣，避免單調(diào)乏味，更重要的是起到啟下的作用；范文中使用了較多的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，原因狀語(yǔ)從句as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are，時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句When I was in Junior High School，動(dòng)作分詞做狀語(yǔ)saying that it promised a better future，定語(yǔ)從句the fact that I was not good at Physics，強(qiáng)調(diào)句It was only two months later that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese．原因狀語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)作分詞做狀語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句等語(yǔ)法的使用提升了文章的檔次，同時(shí)也顯示較高的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)點(diǎn)使用能力；范文中注意使用了extremely，immediately等副詞，switched，witness等動(dòng)詞，顯示了豐富的詞匯量，表意更精準(zhǔn)，提升了文章的檔次；范文中使用了一些固定短語(yǔ)：promise a better future，follow this trend，be good at，lay in等，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，使文章更加充實(shí)完整．
     No one can ever achieve any success without failure，as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are．（高分句型一）
    When I was in Junior High School，most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science，saying that it promised a better future．（高分句型二）
    It was only two months later，when I failed an extremely important Physics exam，that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese，English as well as History．（高分句型三）

解答 No one can ever achieve any success without failure，as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are．（高分句型一）
      When I was in Junior High School，most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science，saying that it promised a better future．（高分句型二）I tried to follow this trend despite the fact that I was not good at Physics．It was only two months later，when I failed an extremely important Physics exam，that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese，English as well as History．（高分句型三）I switched for arts immediately．
      The following years witnessed my excellent school performance then．So failure is not as terrible as we have expected as long as we can learn something from it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．