Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
“Can I see my baby?” asked the happy new mother. The bundle(嬰兒包)was placed in her arms and when she moved the fold of cloth to look upon his tiny face, she gasped-the baby has been born without ears. Time, however, proved that the baby’s hearing was perfect except his appearance.
One day when he rushed home from school and threw himself into his mother’s arms, he cried out bitterly, “A boy, a big boy… called me a f-…freak(怪人).” She sighed, knowing that his life was to be endless of heartbreaks.
He grew up, handsome and popular with his fellow students. He developed a gift for literature and music. But for his misfortune, he might have been class president.
The boy’s father had a talk with the family doctor. “Could nothing be done?” “I believe we could graft(移植)on a pair of outer ears, if they could be donated(捐獻(xiàn)),”the doctor decided. So the search began for a person who would make such a sacrifice a young man. Two years went by. Then, “You’re going to the hospital, son. Mother and I have someone who will donate the ears you need. But it’s a secret,” said the father.
The operation was a brilliant success. His talents blossomed (開花)into genius. School and college became a series of successes. Later he married and entered the diplomatic（外交）service. “But I must know!” he urged his father. “Who gave so much for me? I could never do enough for him.”
“I do not believe you could,” said the father, “but the agreement was that you are not to know….not yet.” The years kept the secret, but the day did come…. one of the darkest days that ever pass through a son. He stood with his father over his mother’s casket(棺材).Slowly and softly, the father stretched forth a hand and raised the thick, reddish-brown hair to let out the secret.
寫作內(nèi)容
以約30個(gè)詞概括這個(gè)感人的故事
以約120個(gè)詞，請(qǐng)就 “在受別人的幫助中，學(xué)會(huì)了幫助別人”的話題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)你內(nèi)心的感受，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：
1）你看完這個(gè)故事后，你如何評(píng)價(jià)這位母親的無私行為；
2）請(qǐng)以你的日常生活經(jīng)歷的事情為例，說明別人的善良行為對(duì)你的影響；
3）你的感想。
寫作要求
1. 作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，
2．可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
3. 無需標(biāo)題
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確； 信息內(nèi)容完整； 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

An selfish mother donated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it. At last, the son got the secret from his father after his mother died.
Help is always unselfish. The mother donated her ears to her son, showing her greatest love to her child. From these, we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children.
In the daily life, we always get kind help from our teachers, classmates and friends. And their kind help is always unselfish. When I was in Senior Middle School, I lived in the school. Every time I was ill, my teachers and classmates gave me kind help, taking good care of me all the time. In today’s society, I was affected by some bad things, which made me think that there was no kindness in the world. It was my friends who did everything to help me out.
From these experiences, I have realized that helping others is necessary, and true love does exist in our daily life. Since then, I have changed myself a lot, and I also give hands to others when they are in need of help。

作文的要分兩部分，1.以約30個(gè)詞概括這個(gè)感人的故事2.在受別人的幫助中，學(xué)會(huì)了幫助別人”的話題寫一篇英語短文，在寫本文之前，一定要細(xì)細(xì)看過上面的文章，從上文中概括出主要內(nèi)容，但不能原封不動(dòng)的抄下來。然后根據(jù)要求對(duì)此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表你的看法。第二部分的要點(diǎn)也給出了，1）你看完這個(gè)故事后，你如何評(píng)價(jià)這位母親的無私行為； 2）請(qǐng)以你的日常生活經(jīng)歷的事情為例，說明別人的善良行為對(duì)你的影響； 3）你的感想。
本文重要的筆墨應(yīng)放在舉例說明上，而最后一段，應(yīng)一兩句話即可。注意使用恰當(dāng)連詞連接句子，使語篇連貫。使用句型要力求多變。