Question

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請根據(jù)以上三幅女兒為父母手繪的出行攻略，用英語寫一篇作文．
〖寫作內(nèi)容〗
1．用約30詞概述手繪攻略的特點(diǎn)
2，概述你看了此攻略后的感受（至少兩點(diǎn)）；
3．•舉例說明你能為父母或長輩做些什么（至少兩盧）
〖寫作要求〗
1．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭部分己寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
2•作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
TO make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young woman has drawn three pictures．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱．重要短語：on one's way to（在去往的路上），be considerate（體貼的，考慮周到的），taken pains to do sth（不辭辛勞地做某事），come up with （想出），be of great help（有幫助的），as for（關(guān)于），be faced with （面臨，面對），try one's best（努力做某事），bring sb up（撫養(yǎng)某人），care for（關(guān)心），be supposed to do （應(yīng)該做某事），have a talk with sb（和某人交流；談話）．
【高分句型一】
1．To make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young girl has drawn three pictures．
此處是由"不定式"表目的，主句為"a young girl has drawn three pictures"．
【高分句型二】
2．These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America．
此處是由省略了關(guān)系代詞"that/which"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"information"定語從句為"the old couple may need on their way to America"，從句中動詞"need"后缺少賓語．
【高分句型三】
3．Seeing the pictures，I'm deeply moved like many others．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞"Seeing the pictures"作時(shí)間狀語，主句為"I'm deeply moved like many others"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動詞"see"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
【高分句型四】
4．Also，she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea，which will be of great help to her parents．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，主句為"she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea"，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語．

解答 To make it easier for her parents to get to America，a young girl has drawn three pictures．【高分句型一】These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America．【高分句型二】With vivid drawings and clear instructions，they are impressive and easy to understand．（概括）
 Seeing the pictures，I'm deeply moved like many others．【高分句型三】The young woman is very sweet and considerate．She loves her parents so much．Also，she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea，which will be of great help to her parents．【高分句型四】（感受）
As for me，my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life．I should try my best to help them．First，we should respect our parents since they bring us up and care for us all the time．Second，we are supposed to do some housework at home．For example，we should help clean the room，cook meals and so on．Third，we should care for them and have a talk with them about their work，trying to understand them．（能為父母或長輩做的事）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．