Question

16．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Tom發(fā)來一封電子郵件詢問你的暑期計劃和安排．請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他回信．
1．完成作業(yè)并多讀書；2．打籃球、健身或者有時候參加社區(qū)活動；
3．結(jié)識更多同齡朋友；4．其他（如參加實踐活動等）．
詞數(shù)：120個左右（開頭與結(jié)尾已給出）
Dear Tom，
                                                          
That's all．Best wishes for you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是提綱類作文，因為討論的是暑假的安排，所以主要用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時，用第一人稱．文章主要分成兩部分，一 點明要寫的主要目的；二 敘述暑假安排．其中第二部分是重點．
高分句型
1．I need to finish my homework assigned by teachers，which is the most important point in my view．
我需要完成老師布置的作業(yè)，我認為這是最重要的一點．句子中which引導定語從句，代指主句的含義．
2．If I have more free time I'll take part in social activities to learn experience through them．
如果我有更多的時間，我會參加一些社會活動來學習一些經(jīng)驗．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm delighted to chat with you about my plans and arrangements in the summer holiday（點明要寫的主要目的）．
First，I need to finish my homework assigned by teachers，which is the most important point in my view（高分句型一）．And I will choose to read my favorite novels as many as possible．Moreover，I'd like to play basketball to keep fit and maybe take part in an exciting basketball match in our neighborhood．In addition，I'll make more friends with foreign students of the same age on the Internet．If I have more free time I'll take part in social activities to learn experience through them（高分句型二）．（假期安排）
That's all．Best wishes for you（寫信套語）．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 在文章里用了表達先后關系的連接詞First（首先），Moreover（再者），In addition（此外），這使得文章條理清楚，我們還可以用first of all，what's more，besides，above all等等．