Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國朋友 Paul 告訴你他對中國文化很感興趣，希望了解中國古典音樂．請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1．簡單介紹中國古典音樂（樂器、音樂風(fēng)格、和西方音樂的不同等）

2．你會送他一張二胡音樂的 CD．

注意： 1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．

Dear Paul，

How is everything going ？

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Yours，

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Paul，

How is everything going？ I'm so glad to know you adore Chinese culture． Without doubt， Chinese classical music is one of the typical symbols． Actually， in China， Chinese classical music is never out of date． It is often played by many gifted musicians who play traditional Chinese instruments like guzheng， the yangqin，the pipa， xiao and so on．

Different from western music， Chinese traditional melody is connected to Chinese poetry， which makes it more charming． When you listen to it， you must be personally on the scene， just like communicating with the composer． In order to let you know more about it， I will send you a CD of music played by erhu． After you experience elements from different cultures， you will know the power and the beauty of the music． Hopefully you will enjoy it!

Yours，

LiHua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封電子郵件。假定你是李華，你的美國朋友 Paul 告訴你他對中國文化很感興趣，希望了解中國古典音樂．請你給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：簡單介紹中國古典音樂（樂器、音樂風(fēng)格、和西方音樂的不同等）；你會送他一張二胡音樂的 CD。寫作時首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，要點(diǎn)突出，句子過渡自然，層次分明，文中使用高級句子。It is often played by many gifted musicians who play traditional Chinese instruments like guzheng， the yangqin，the pipa， xiao and so on．被動語態(tài)和who引導(dǎo)的定語從句完美結(jié)合；Chinese traditional melody is connected to Chinese poetry， which makes it more charming．句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；When you listen to it， you must be personally on the scene，句中when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；In order to let you know more about it，動詞不定式做目的狀語。