Question

As time passing by, young students from all over the world get together at one of the sixteen conservation camps. The aim is to help protecting the countryside and its wildlife.
Many animals and plants are in danger of disappear forever. The dormouse, a kind of mouse, for example, needs woodland plants for food and trees to stay. It’s habitat is being destroyed by man and it needs our help to survive.
Through this activity you will learn about the nature and how to protect it. Our trained leaders will company you and tell you everything what you need to know. Because of this, you needn’t to have any experience, just energy and enthusiasm. You will explore the countryside and work to ensure the survival of hundred of animals and plants.

Answer 1

【小題1】As改為With 或 passing 改為 passes
【小題2】Protecting---- protect
【小題3】Disappear---- disappearing
【小題4】stay∧in.
【小題5】It’s ---- Its
【小題6】去掉 the（nature前）
【小題7】company 改成accompany 
【小題8】that或去掉what
【小題9】needn’t 后面去掉to
【小題10】hundred改成hundreds

解析試題分析：
【小題1】As是連詞后面應(yīng)該接句子，passing 改為 passes，也可以把a(bǔ)s改為With，用with符合結(jié)構(gòu)
【小題2】考查詞組：help （to） do幫助做…,help后面接protect
【小題3】of是介詞，后面應(yīng)該接動(dòng)名詞disappearing
【小題4】這是不定式做定語(yǔ)，不定式和名詞trees之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，可是stay是不及物動(dòng)詞，要接介詞in.
【小題5】It’s是it is的縮寫，Its是“它的”
【小題6】去掉 the（nature前），因?yàn)閚ature表示“自然”的時(shí)候，不加定冠詞
【小題7】company是名詞“陪伴”，改成動(dòng)詞：accompany 
【小題8】這是定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是everything用 that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，或去掉what
【小題9】needn’t是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞， 后面接動(dòng)詞原形，去掉to
【小題10】hundreds of是“許多”的意思，只有和具體的數(shù)字連用，hundred才是原形
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過(guò)后的短文是否語(yǔ)意通順。