【題目】假如你是李華。你將要參加本周六主題為An unforgettable Experience in High School 的英語演講比賽。你寫了一篇演講稿，請外教Jason給予指導。請根據(jù)以下要點，給他寫一封郵件。

1.說明情況；

2.指導內(nèi)容（詞匯，語法，結構等）；

3.回復時間；

4.表達感激。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jason,

__________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jason,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor. It’s about an English speech contest with the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which I’m going to take part in this Saturday. I’ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory.

I’m not sure of the usage of some words. There may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article? If it’s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply. (113 words)

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華。你將要參加本周六主題為An unforgettable Experience in High School 的英語演講比賽。你寫了一篇演講稿，請外教Jason給予指導。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。請根據(jù)以下要點，給他寫一封郵件。1.說明情況；2.指導內(nèi)容（詞匯，語法，結構等）；3.回復時間；4.表達感激。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，采用三段式，銜接緊密，布局合理，語句精練，同時使用高級句子。the title An Unforgettable Experience in High School, which I’m going to take part in this Saturday. which引導非限制性定語從句；I’ve finished my draft, but I find it still far from satisfactory. but表示轉折引導并列句恰到好處；Would you be so kind to spare some time to check them out and improve my article?文句運用巧妙；If it’s convenient to you, please send it back by Thursday afternoon. 含If條件狀語從句的復合句；I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.固定句式堪稱經(jīng)典。

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