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14．假設你們班最近就是否應該建設地鐵的問題展開了討論，以下是討論結果，請根據表格提示給China Daily 寫一封信，反映討論結果并提出自己的觀點．

贊成觀點	反對觀點	你的觀點
1．解決交通擁堵問題，方便市民生活． 2．提供一種新的交通方式，促進環(huán)境保護．	1．建設時間長，影響交通． 2．投入資金過大，成本回收過慢．	…

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Dear Editor，
Recently，my class have had a heated argument on whether a subway should be built or not in our city．Opinions are varied．
                                                                                    
Yours Sincerely，
    Zheng Yan．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
For another，it provides a new means of transportation，which is environmentally friendly
高分句型二：
 I support the idea that a subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but more space will be saved．
句型一 which is environmentally friendly．該句是一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中充當主語，替代前面的先行詞transportation．
句型二   because not only will the environment be protected but more space will be saved．該句是一個由because引導的原因狀語從句，在該從句中使用了not only…but also 連接并列句，not only后面跟的從句要使用部分倒裝，即將主語同謂語部分的助動詞進行位置的交換．

解答 Dear Editor，
   Recently，my class have had a heated argument on whether a subway should be built or not in our city．Opinions are varied．Some of my classmates think it necessary to build a subway．For one thing，building a subway can help solve traffic problems adn people will enjoy a more convenient life．For another，it provides a new means of transportation，which is environmentally friendly．（贊成觀點）（高分句型一）
   Others hold the opposite opinion．They think that the long process of construction is bound to influence the city's traffic．What's more，too much money will be spend building it，and it will take a long time to refund it．（反對觀點） Weighing the pros and cons，I support the idea that a subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but more space will be saved．（高分句型二）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Zheng Yan

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