Question

9．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
    During the summer you should be even more carefully than usual about the food you prepare．Food goes bad fast in hot weather than in cold weather．When you were'shopping，buy frozen and refrigerated foods．Don't make long stops on way home，because frozen foods can become soft or warm．Using bags help keep them cold until you get home．
Milk products should be refrigerated immediately．When refrigeration can't be made use，buy dry foods．Don't leave food in a hot car．Picnic favorite like meat，chicken and egg salad should be keeping in a cooler．Above all，whether the food doesn't seem normal in smell or appearance，throw it away immediately． Don't taste them．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇說明文．夏天食物更容易變壞，文章以一系列的建議（買冷凍食品時(shí)不要在路上停留太久；到家前要用袋子保持食物冷凍；奶制品應(yīng)該及時(shí)冷凍；冰箱用不了時(shí)，要買干的食品；不要把食品放在暖和的車?yán)�；野餐食品要保持冷凍；不要嘗食不正常食品）說明我們要特別留心夏季的食物．

解答 During the summer you should be even more carefully than usual about the 
                                                                  careful
food you prepare．Food goes bad fast in hot weather than in cold weather．
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When you wereshopping，buy frozen and refrigerated foods．Don't make long stops
                are
on∧way home，because frozen foods can become soft or warm．Using bags help
    the                                                                                                       helps
keep them cold until you get home．Milk products should be refrigerated immediately．
          
When refrigeration can't be made use∧，buy dry foods．Don't leave food in a hot car．
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Picnic favoritelike meat，chicken and egg salad should be keeping in a cooler．
         favorites                                                              kept 
Above all，whether the food doesn't seem normal in smell or appearance，
                  if
throw it away immediately．Don't taste them．
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1．carefully→careful   考查形容詞的用法．作系動(dòng)詞be的表語，要用形容詞．故改為careful．
2．fast→faster  考查形容詞的比較級(jí)．根據(jù)后面的than可知，這里是冬天和夏天作比較，要用比較級(jí)形式，故改為faster．
3．were→are  考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)文章的整體時(shí)態(tài)可知，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，故改為are．
4．on后加the   考查冠詞的固定搭配．表示"在…的路上"要用on one's/the way to+地點(diǎn)，故加上定冠詞the．
5．help→helps  考查動(dòng)詞（主謂一致）．非謂語動(dòng)詞作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)形式，故改為helps．
6．use后加of  考查介詞的固定搭配．表示"使用，利用"要用短語make use of表示，故要加上of．
7．favorite→favorites  考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)．favorite作名詞時(shí)，是可數(shù)名詞．根據(jù)后面的meat，chicken and egg salad 可知，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故改為favorites．
8．keeping→kept  考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)．根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句意可知，這里表被動(dòng)，故把keeping改為kept．
9．whether→if  考查連詞．根據(jù)句意，這里表示"如果食物看起來或者聞起來不正常，趕緊扔了它，不要嘗"，故要用if引導(dǎo)．
10．them→it  考查代詞．根據(jù)句意，這里指代前文的the food，表單數(shù)，故改為it．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 1．on one's/the way to+地點(diǎn)表示"在…的路上"，地點(diǎn)是副詞時(shí)，介詞to要省略
2．whether和if的區(qū)別：
  a．whether和if在賓語從句中表"是否"時(shí)，大部分時(shí)候可互換
  b．if除了表"是否"，還可以表示"如果"，引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句