Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)上面兩幅圖寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

??? 1. 第一段把漫畫中的內(nèi)容描述清楚；

??? 2. 第二段寫你自己對(duì)此幅漫畫的感受和觀點(diǎn)；適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，使語言連貫。

??? 詞數(shù)：100左右

??? 參考詞匯：扶起瓶子straighten the bottle up

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Do you understand this cartoon? Let me tell you. One day, the son wanted to help a little girl stand up when she fell over, but his mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” A few days later, the mother was shocked at seeing her son just let the fallen oil bottle lie. She asked him why he didn’t put it in place, but the boy talked back, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”

I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their children. They should not only care for their children’s health, but their minds as well. They should let their children know it’s a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in a society which is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫類作文。首先要看懂漫畫所要表達(dá)的意思。其次注意1. 第一段把漫畫中的內(nèi)容描述清楚； 2. 第二段寫你自己對(duì)此幅漫畫的感受和觀點(diǎn)；適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，使語言連貫。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.這里含有一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句；She asked him why he didn’t put it in place,這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句；If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it這里含有一個(gè)賓語從句。

考點(diǎn)：漫畫類書面表達(dá)