Question

14．假定你是李華，聽聞國外某網站要在全球范圍內評選"The Most Qualified Student"（最美中學生），請你用英語給該網站寫一封推薦信．內容包括：
1．介紹被推薦人（林揚）的基本信息；
2．說明推薦理由．
注意：
1．詞數100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語給出，不計入總詞數．
Dear Editor，
I'm a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student．It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends，Lin Yang．
First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．Last but not least，he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．
Therefore，I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封推薦信．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱黑人一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內容包括：一寫信的目的；二介紹被推薦人的基本信息和推薦理由；三表示盼望．
高分句型：
1．First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．句子里who is among the most diligent students in our school，是主語he的定語從句．
首先，他是我們學校最聰明的學生之一，不僅學習努力而且舉止良好．
2．Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．句子里including painting and playing the violin是現(xiàn)在分詞定語，和名詞短語 his diverse hobbies是主動關系．
第二，他有多種愛好，包括繪畫和談小提琴．

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm a senior high school student and I happened to hear that your website was hosting an activity to select The Most Qualified Student．（寫信的目的）
      It is a great honour for me to introduce to you one of my best friends，Lin Yang．First of all，he，who is among the most diligent students in our school，not only studies hard，but also behaves well．【高分句型一】Secondly，he stands out for his diverse hobbies，including painting and playing the violin．【高分句型二】Last but not least，he is warm-hearted and willing to help others in need．（介紹被推薦人的基本信息和推薦理由）
      Therefore，I here recommend him to you with all my heart and I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment．（表示盼望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
篇文章要達到表達流暢，邏輯連貫合理，敘述有序，必須有有效的連接成分，使文章能承上啟下．建議考生在一些段意群的開頭過渡部分用一些過渡性詞語或短語，如：
　　①表轉折　but、yet、however、although、nevertheless、in　spite　of、after　all等；②表遞進　What's　more、in　addition、besides、further　more、moreover等；③表因果　due　to、because　of、for、therefore、thus、as　a　consequence/in　consequence、thanks　to等；④表對比　on　the　other　hand、instead　of、unlike、on　the　contrary、otherwise等；⑤表總結in　one　word、on　the　whole、in　short、in　brief、in　all等．