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2．請以What are MOOCs？為題，寫一篇介紹"慕課"（MOOC）的文章，內(nèi)容包括下列表格中的主要信息．字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右（文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）．

慕課（MOOC）	最近涌現(xiàn)出來的一種在線課程開發(fā)模式． 其特點是增強(qiáng)知識傳播，強(qiáng)調(diào)分享和協(xié)作精神．
M--Massive（大規(guī)模）	與傳統(tǒng)課程只有幾十個或幾百個學(xué)生不同，一門MOOCs課程學(xué)生可達(dá)一萬多人甚至十幾萬人．
O--Open （開放）	以興趣為導(dǎo)向，凡是想學(xué)的都可進(jìn)來學(xué)，不分國籍，只需一個郵箱就可以注冊（register）參與．
O--Online（在線）	學(xué)習(xí)不受時空限制．
C--Course（課程）	該課程對授課者和學(xué)習(xí)者都有利．

What are MOOCs？
MOOCs are a kind of new courses，which are becoming more and more popular around the world．（高分句型一）They change how people learn．
What are MOOCs？Well，as the letters suggest，MOOCs stands for Massive Open Online Courses．It means many thousands of people can attend the courses at the same time，which is different from the traditional ways of teaching and learning，where lessons are usually given to several hundred of students．（高分句型二）The courses stress team work as well as the spreading of knowledge．Anyone who is interested can get registered by QQ or other means and study on the Internet，regardless of nationalities．（高分句型三）There are all kinds of MOOCs online，of which some will suit you．（高分句型四）People can watch or listen to the lessons whenever they like，which makes it convenient for both teachers and learners．（高分句型五）．

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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請以What are MOOCs？為題，寫一篇介紹"慕課"（MOOC）的文章，內(nèi)容包括下列表格中的主要信息，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：around the world世界范圍；stand for 代表；at the same time同時；is different from 與…不同；as well as也，和；regardless of不管，不顧；
MOOCs are a kind of new courses，which are becoming more and more popular around the world．（高分句型一）
It means many thousands of people can attend the courses at the same time，which is different from the traditional ways of teaching and learning，where lessons are usually given to several hundred of students．（高分句型二）
Anyone who is interested can get registered by QQ or other means and study on the Internet，regardless of nationalities．（高分句型三）
There are all kinds of MOOCs online，of which some will suit you．（高分句型四）
People can watch or listen to the lessons whenever they like，which makes it convenient for both teachers and learners．（高分句型五）

解答 What are MOOCs？
       MOOCs are a kind of new courses，which are becoming more and more popular around the world．（高分句型一）They change how people learn．
       What are MOOCs？Well，as the letters suggest，MOOCs stands for Massive Open Online Courses．It means many thousands of people can attend the courses at the same time，which is different from the traditional ways of teaching and learning，where lessons are usually given to several hundred of students．（高分句型二）The courses stress team work as well as the spreading of knowledge．Anyone who is interested can get registered by QQ or other means and study on the Internet，regardless of nationalities．（高分句型三）There are all kinds of MOOCs online，of which some will suit you．（高分句型四）People can watch or listen to the lessons whenever they like，which makes it convenient for both teachers and learners．（高分句型五）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．