Question

4．請以"One person I'm grateful to"為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個詞的短文，記述一個你認為值得感謝的人．要求如下：
1．內容必須結合生活中的一個事例；
2．簡要說明值得感謝的原因或從中得到的啟示；
3．文中不得透漏個人信息．
注意：文章的標題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）．
One Person I'm Grateful to
                                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本文主語開放性的作文，話題是"One person I'm grateful to"．這個人可以是現(xiàn)實中的人也可以是文學作品中某個人物．考生可以敘述身邊人物的具體事例來說明自己感激的人的具體品質．在范文中，作者選擇了自己的英語老師為例．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides，further，last but not least等．在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
【亮點說明】本文最大的亮點在于高級詞匯的使用，如be supposed to do sth應該做某事；dedicate oneself to…．專心于…；regardless of不管，不顧…；gain confidence贏得自信；高級句式的使用也較為頻繁，如which worried me a lot．中的which引導的是非限制性定語從句．以及Having beenpersuaded to change my attitude，I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well．中的非謂語動詞having beenpersuaded…用法．
We are supposed to be grateful to people who arealways there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our soulsblossom．（高分句型一）
During the previous study，my biggest flaw must come tocarelessness，which worried me a lot．（高分句型二）
Having been persuaded tochange my attitude，I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well．（高分句型三）
 I am grateful to my English teacher for all thesupport he has given me，which has made me stronger and a better person．（高分句型四）

解答 We are supposed to be grateful to people who arealways there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our soulsblossom．（高分句型一）
       My English teacher is such a great soul，to whom I owemany thanks．During the previous study，my biggest flaw must come tocarelessness，which worried me a lot．（高分句型二）To make matters worse，I was too anxiousto seek the fundamental reason for my failure．I just dedicated myself to hugeamounts of practice，regardless of repeated mistakes．Fortunately，my teachernoticed it and offered to have a long talk with me．Having been persuaded tochange my attitude，I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well．（高分句型三）
       I am grateful to my English teacher for all thesupport he has given me，which has made me stronger and a better person．（高分句型四）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．