Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是一名高二學生。最近，你校廣播站向全體學生招募兩名英語播音員。你很想嘗試一下，請根據(jù)下面的要點寫一封自薦信。

1.自我介紹和寫信的目的；

2.自身優(yōu)勢；

3.希望被錄取。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua, a student in Class 1, Grade 2. I have read the notice

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Yours,

Li hua

Answer 1

【答案】I am Li Hua, a student in Class 1, Grade 2. I have read the notice that our school radio needs two English announcers, therefore, I am writing to volunteer to serve as one.

First of all, I am greatly interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future. Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience. Besides; I am good at English, especially spoken English. I won first prize in the English Speech Contest last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. If I were admitted, I would spare no effort to serve the students.

I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance to work for the school radio station. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先審題，這篇文章要求假定你是李華，是一名高二學生。最近，你校廣播站向全體學生招募兩名英語播音員。你很想嘗試一下，請根據(jù)下面的要點寫一封自薦信。任務中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容：1.自我介紹和寫信的目的；2.自身優(yōu)勢；3.希望被錄取。

其次選用正確的人稱和時態(tài)，考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時，要注意:提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當補充。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: First of all首先，be good at擅長……還使用了同位語從句I have read the notice that our school radio needs two English announcers, therefore, I am writing to volunteer to serve as one.和賓語從句So I think I am highly qualified for the job.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。