請根據(jù)下面提示,寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

    In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

    提示詞:放大鏡magnifying glass

范文

In the picture, there is a cup, which is usually presented to the winners in sports competitions. The cup is definitely a symbol of great success. But what makes me puzzled is that a magnifying glass is used to see its light scratch on the cup, which is not at all obvious.

What I see in this picture reminds me of people who use a magnifying glass to see the faults in others. Those people are usually very demanding and picky. They only see the “scratches” instead of the whole cup. As we all know, everyone has both strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, we should be objective about others’ achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose. Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided.


解析:

一、評分原則:

1.本題總分為15分,按4個檔次給分。

2.評分時,先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言質(zhì)量初步確定其檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡    

   量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。

3.評分時應(yīng)考慮:文章是否扣題,結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整,內(nèi)容是否充實、健康,思維是否活    

躍,邏輯是否清晰,語言是否規(guī)范,交際是否得體。

4.拼寫、標(biāo)點符號或書寫影響內(nèi)容表達(dá)時,應(yīng)視其影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及   

詞匯用法均可接受。

5.詞數(shù)少于50,從總分中減去1分。

二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求:

第一檔 

完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

·內(nèi)容充實,體現(xiàn)了活躍的思維和清晰的邏輯;

·交際得體,表達(dá)時充分考慮到了交際對象的需求;

·體現(xiàn)出較強的語言運用能力。

完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

13分-15分

第二檔 

基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

·內(nèi)容、邏輯和交際等方面基本符合要求;

·所用語法和詞匯滿足了任務(wù)的要求;

·語法或用詞方面有一些錯誤,但不影響理解。

基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。

9分-12分 

第三檔

未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

·表達(dá)未能切題;

·所用詞匯有限,語法或用詞方面的錯誤影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。未能清楚地傳達(dá)信息。

4分-8分

第四檔

未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。

·寫了少量相關(guān)信息;

·語法或用詞方面錯誤較多,嚴(yán)重影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。

1分-3分

0分

未傳達(dá)任何信息;所寫內(nèi)容與要求無關(guān)。

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